Antique Briefcase

For English, we wrote a story based on a photograph. My friend told me Y! Responses of great help in giving advice. My classmates ordered me 3 of 5, and said: I need a less predictable end, I'm not sure. So here:

A month ago, when Sharon asked for a divorce, Charles said: "It would work out." Now, it is not so sure. Sharon did not come home. Even when it does They do not talk Just silence. Charles did not find anything about it. They have nothing in common more, Charles knows, but he does not want to admit.

There are so many things Charles has always to do with Sharon. What they dreamed of doing together since before their marriage. Charles look at this list so many times, he has memorized. "Get a dog, go to Europe, watching the stars and the sunrise," Charles thinks aloud. Charles wants to show this list to Sharon, to remind him of the time when they were young and happy, when everything seemed possible, but he knows that Sharon thinks that an excuse. The thought of talking to new Charles gives a split second of hope that will soon be replaced by loneliness.

Need to run an errand, Charles put down the list and grabbed his briefcase and his coat. When he enters the city, there are no parking spaces when he parks his car in the parking garage. Charles's hands the keys of parking attendant and he said: "How have you been? I have not seen you in awhile. "Of course, Charles replied:" I'm fine. Thank you. "Charles knows that everyone thinks he has the perfect life. He has a steady job, a nice house in the suburbs, and a beautiful woman, but Charles would give anything for Sharon to talk again.
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After the race, Charles continued to walk around the city. Charles was not really thinking about anything, as he walks while enjoying the view of the wonders of buildings and relaxation. Charles stops at Umberto Restaurant and Bar, and she immediately recalls the night he met Sharon. The restaurant looks always the same. There is the old billiard table in the middle of the room, the walls a bright red, the clock deformed above the kitchen door, and small tables in blue next to the sidewalls. As Charles was there trying to relive the night he and Sharon met, he realizes how much he misses his laugh and his eyes. Soon, Charles leaves Umberto and ranges from jewelry shops on Bowery St. Finally, he decided on a sapphire necklace, and he goes to the flower shop and bought a bouquet of orange roses and hurries home to call Sharon and set up a dinner.

Before Charles arrived at the house, he saw Sharon's car in the driveway. He rushed into the house to his surprise. As Charles entered the room, he sees his property Sharon packing. Sharon turns around and finally said: "I'm sorry Charles, but I'm leaving." She walks toward him and kisses him goodbye. After Sharon left, Charles fell to his knees with millions of thoughts going through my head. Sharon party. Suddenly, Charles gets up and gets into his car. He drives so it does not know where it goes. All he knows is that he can not be in this house. Finally, he stops and walks with Umberto's voice echoed in his head Sharon.

how this fight: Charles is a homo. hope it helps =]


I think Charles has killed Shannon in his sleep, uh Charles obviously need to get on his revwenjkehstjdh hooker and it would be a great story.

You have much to learn about men. Try to talk w / male friends about it. They may offer some clues.

I'm sorry, it's such a cliche plot lies in an after-school special on Hallmark. The time now is boring. When reading a story, it is often easier to understand when it is written.