Kids Sun Hats

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The hole in the wall was deep and black. You could hardly see anything the other side to the young mouse named Jeremy Jankovics Ainsworth. Jankovics family consisted of twelve healthy gray mice, there was Edgar, Elbert and Ernest, portliest all. Then came Emma, Ellie and Jenna, the thinnest girls. Old mice lived on the lower levels, older mice were Jason, Joseph and Payton. All children did what they wanted, except when their father, named Peter, became angry at all and made them tremble and shiver. Two mice were left to complete the clan, Gilda was a mother, and Ainsworth was their grandfather. Ainsworth mouse was very old, he could not remember what he had just said. But all the grandchildren loved it, it's a fact, even when he forgot their names, they did not like that. Jeremy Jankovics was small but courageous and Emma and Ellie always included. Edgar Elbert and did not like cats, but they do wear two hats colored.
The family was very poor Jankovics they want everyday to be the true cheese. Then one day, Jeremy spoke loud and clear: "I will feed us, do not worry dear mother." Gilda smiled and said softly: "Sun be careful, the cat bites terribly."
His brothers and sisters wished him good luck. He asked, "Are not you coming too?" They said 'No chance small bud.

Jeremy mind was a whirlwind, he was not sure if he would return to see his daughters sister. They all said goodbye and waved their hands, "Jeremy did not come home without a big dish of yam.
The mouse walked in front unsecured, under tables and chairs legs grew bustle.
"What I am I?" he wondered nervously, "the cat to me and eat early."
To the surprise of Jeremy, his journey has been without problems. He brought a bag full of good wedge eat. Her mother was proud and so was her father, "you're the best son," they repeated quite happy. They opened the bag and it all felt good, carrots and cookies and more delicious food. The cheese in particular has not been forgotten, he even made into jam, and threw the bottle at them. His brothers took his gifts, with smiles on their faces, "its my turn now," said Ernest trying probe the bravest. "No no no, you do not have to go now." Jeremy has warned while raising her brow.

"How dare you challenge my decision? Ernest said in a second.
"I do not want to hurt you, that's all," said Jeremy, "he said joyfully.
"End of discussion," cried Ernest, his wagging tail, whiskers apparently excited. So little fat Ernest came out of their hole, no weapon, no shield, hoping it all. "Come back you Rodents fat, you do not see the cat? " Jeremy shouted to his brother who was fat. Ernest did not listen, he did not even care that the cat was hidden behind the stairs. The cat was looking, standing so quiet that only Ernest listened to the song of birds and riots.
"Now is my chance to come out and throw," whispered the cat, ready to rebound. Ernest continued to walk until his proud chin. He went to the kitchen, his worries in a cloud. Out came the cat, so light and efficient, there was no noise, just as you guessed. With its claws so sharp, he grabbed poor Ernest and trenches and reduced rodents protested. The squeaks of mice were difficult to hear that her hair is flying with his ears. His nose was next and so was his tail, "Stop you fool!" and he cried.