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Savannah Bee

Posted on January 19, 2010.
Savannah BeeWhat do you think of this excerpt from my story?

Savannah and Carter sat at the kitchen table carving a pumpkin in the face of overwhelming. A curved knife his way through the surface, cutting the shape of a mouth. Carter smiled as Savannah orange goo guys out of the pumpkin. It felt slimy and dirty against his hands, then she went to the sink for washing. Even if it did, it was out of control of his body. His mouth curled into a sly smile as she leaned over, but when she turned around, he turned to his pumpkin.
"Jacky is going to look really cute." she said, patting the pumpkin. "Right, Jacky?
It was funny because Reese always called pumpkins. He thought Savannah was cooing so cute, pumpkin, even if it was just an inanimate object.

Carter helped to carve into the pumpkin's eyes, a furtive kiss on his face. He tried to ensure that he did not cut with the knife. But sometimes he plays like he was stabbed in the neck. The doorbell rang and Carter went to get it. Three little girls in identical costumes Bumble Bee beamed him.
"Treat Trick-or-!" They said in unison, holding their bags.
He smiled, passing handfuls of candy to each girl.
"Thanks!" they said, frolicking along its front yard.
"Aww ... their so cute!" humming Savannah, taking a handful of pumpkin seeds and fried burst into his mouth.

Carter mother used to make pumpkin seeds every friend of Halloween. She stopped when he was in sixth grade. When Savannah Carter said about it, she had her own mother to make pumpkin seeds to them. Fried pumpkin seeds were the best. The salty taste on her tongue when his taste buds. The way she melted when he went in his throat. Halloween was his second favorite holiday.
"I have a surprise for you." Carter said, leading her into the white room.
Savannah smiled, anticipating the "surprise". He told her to close her eyes and waited for about thirty seconds to get her riled up.
"What is it!" she shrieked.
He spent a ring in hand. She lowered her eyes and sighed.
"Aww ... a ring with a shark in it! Thank you so much!"
He knew how much she loved the great white shark and had received a ring with sterling pendant shark for it.
Someone knocked at the door, assuming it was some trick-or over-caterers, Carter will get his bowl of candy. At the door, Andy, Holly, Reese, Elisha, and Palma was there.
Trick-or-Treat! "They joked, make their way into his house.

They were to spend the night at home for the night of Halloween. Since mother was overprotective Savannah, Savannah has lied to his mother and told her she was at the place Detillo Judy. She had not even told her mother that she had a boyfriend yet. She waited for the right time.
Andy fell on his Italian leather sofa, stretching his feet on the table glass. Reese sat beside him, knocking his feet off the table.
"Thought". snarked it, taking off away from the table.
"Turn it on to AMC. Ordered Savannah." They play horror movies all day in October ".
Reese deviated from the path where a Jason Voorhees appeared on the screen.
"Look, Palma. Savannah laughed. "It's your cousin!"
"Ha-ha." She said sarcastically, pushing on his shoulders.
"We'll rent a movie later tonight, huh?" asked Andy.
"Yes, we stop by Hollywood Video after party Stephanie." Savannah said, taking a sip from his glass of grape soda.

Carter has pulled out of bed, placing her on his lap. He fired a blanket off the bed, engulfing both the spirit.

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