Posted on January 20, 2010.
What do you think of this poem I wrote? Just A Dream
Who is this beautiful girl,
sometimes I see in my dreams
it often appears before my presence,
while im asleep
She looks at me with a welcoming smile
I stand there stunned while ah
the amount of beauty, she
can be noticed by far the latest skys
I think if it is not of this world
with stardust in their eyes
In her sparkling eyes I look and look
near being lost, as if im in the labyrinth ah
In her I see my love content
we ah perfect match, like hand and glove ah ah
I examined upwards
I give him the key to my heart, unlock
my heart is his gift, she is not ungrateful
In return, I own, I love you with (my name)
written on the label
now feel like im im the king of the world,
caring no more than any other girls
A dream come tru, it is everything to me
just the thought of her makes my heart sing
I make sure I make her happy,
anyway I can
so I can be sure it does not leave,
regarding Ahe Mann ah better think
She inspires me every night to sleep
with the hope that it will come visit me in my dream
I remain close to her, never taking his eyes
when I look at her my whole world goes
but something happens
it vanishes
murmur in the trees on a windy day ah
i drop to my knees and wondering why
I remember that theres no answer in the sky
then the world becomes black,
everything seems dead
then I wake up with a smile Ah, in my bed
I wanted it bad that my reality
but, unfortunately, once again it was just a dream oh
incredible! you have the i-magi-na-tion
but im a bit confused with
In return, I own, I love you with (my name)
written on the label
He seems to have fallen flat for me .. no offense hehe I just noticed that the rest was wonderful its just that this line is a little different
I hope I helped!
ps i like the line
with stardust in their eyes
keep it up!
